道歉信
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模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建議的內(nèi)容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出對方需要建議的主題).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建議). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根據(jù)要求用不同的句式提出建議，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具體到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建議). I’m sure ______________(預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果， 給對方以行為的信心和決心).
I hope ____________(表達(dá)愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
1、建議信寫作注意事項(xiàng)
建議信的寫作目的是提出建議或忠告，不是投訴信。觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。
2、寫作方法
① 首段：
a. 簡介自己，不要羅嗦；
b. 說明目的，注意語氣。
② 主體：
a. 提出具體建議；
b. 首先肯定優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再寫改進(jìn)內(nèi)容，否則會變成投訴信；
c. 經(jīng)常進(jìn)行交流，注意對方感受，時(shí)時(shí)提到你和我，否則容易跑題寫成議論文。
③尾段：總結(jié)建議，注意禮貌，使對方易于接受。
3、寫作流程圖
第一部分：說明寫信的目的
套語：
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遺憾聽說你在適應(yīng)新學(xué)校方面有困難。這樣的問題是很正常的�？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh會有一些幫助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已經(jīng)收到了你的來信。信上說你打算下個(gè)月來參觀中國十天�？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh對你是有幫助的。
3. I'm writing to you to Psent what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顧客）.
我給你寫信是想說明一下我對于進(jìn)一步改善我們旅館的一些想法，以吸引更多顧客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語詢問我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
很高興收到你的來信，信上詢問我關(guān)于如何適應(yīng)新的學(xué)校生活。下面是我的一些建議。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高興收到你的電子郵件�，F(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何在高中學(xué)好英語，我寫信給你一些建議。
第二部分：介紹詳情、說明原因
套語：
(1) 它將于下午兩點(diǎn)鐘開始，四點(diǎn)鐘結(jié)束，在此期間將會有十五位準(zhǔn)備充分的參賽者發(fā)表演講。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-Ppared contestants will deliver their speeches.
(2) 我們將會在上午八點(diǎn)出發(fā)，九點(diǎn)到達(dá)那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我們會一起……
During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
(4) 記得帶上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 順便說一下，你可以乘坐322路公交車，它會直接把你帶到俱樂部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母語是英語，還是一名英語老師。我代表我們學(xué)校真誠地邀請你來比賽現(xiàn)場。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英語，這會是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保證你在那里會過得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建議
套語：
我建議……
I’d like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分：
希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù)
套語：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望這些建議會對你有用。記�。河兄菊呤戮钩伞�
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一個(gè)決心要成功的人從來不說“不可能”).
我希望這些建議會對你有用。記�。阂粋�(gè)決心要成功的人從來不說“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（給你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
無論如何，我希望這些建議對你有所幫助。我會非常高興看到情況改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！
我相信你會認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。無論你決定做什么，祝你學(xué)習(xí)/工作好運(yùn)。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真誠的希望我的建議對你有一些幫助。如果有更多我可以幫忙的，請告訴我。
配套練習(xí)1
你的英國朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1.你建議的線路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
本文為提綱類作文。首先，學(xué)生要仔細(xì)閱讀提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。 其次，要注意提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語， 按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。 最后，要根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài),語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。本文是一封信，按照內(nèi)容要求可以確定文章的框架結(jié)構(gòu)，三段式，其中第一段寫你所建議的路線，第二部分是本文的主體，要闡述你所建議的路線的原因，好讓 他們有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。寫作時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。
【參考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I Pfer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
配套練習(xí)2
學(xué)校英語報(bào)正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個(gè)欄目（健康、娛樂、文化）中去除一個(gè)，并從三個(gè)備選欄目（時(shí)尚、職業(yè)規(guī)劃、讀者反饋）中挑選一個(gè)納入該報(bào)。假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生程飛，給校報(bào)編輯寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：
1.你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；
2.你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由。
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
這篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類范疇，這篇作文要求就校英語報(bào)改版是事情給校報(bào)編輯寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容： 1. 你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由； 2. 你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由，根據(jù)自己的建議選定欄目的設(shè)置并以郵件方式表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。考生在寫作過程中要確定切題且符合英語寫作邏輯的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。確立郵件文體之后，要弄清要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)展開，條理要清晰，理由要充分，關(guān)鍵的是在寫作的過程中，要注意人稱，時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)和常見的語法問題，文章盡量簡潔，在文章中盡可能多地使用高大上的詞匯，遵循短語優(yōu)先原則在配以特殊句型和復(fù)合句的應(yīng)用，讓文章更上檔次。
【參考范文】
Dear Editor,
I’ve learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one. I’m writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.
Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students’ interest and have positive effects on their study and life.
Compared to the entertainment, I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important. The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. In addition, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.
Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand, it covers one’s career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to one’s career success in the future.
What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.
Yours sincerely,
Cheng Fei
配套練習(xí)3
為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開辟了＂HEART-TO-HEART＂專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 表示理解并給予安慰；
2. 提出建議并說明理由。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)120左右；
2. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；
3. 信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：temper n. 脾氣，情緒
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，要求按照Worried寫的求助信寫一封回信，根據(jù)信中提到的困擾表示理解和安慰，提出建議并給出理由。所以考生在寫作的時(shí)候，要圍繞來信的問題一一給予解答。但是光翻譯要點(diǎn)肯定不行，還要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，關(guān)鍵的是在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。也要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)和常見的語法問題，同時(shí)在列舉建議和理由的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞，如：First，Second，Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。
【參考范文】
Hi Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie
【亮點(diǎn)說明】
所給范文語言簡潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：a good way of……的好方法，let out 釋放，get rid of消除，carry on 繼續(xù)進(jìn)行，句式上體現(xiàn)出多變的特點(diǎn)，如：I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. 這句話用了賓語從句，The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. 這句話用了表語從句和時(shí)間狀語從句，The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. 這句話用了不定式作表語和so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，talk to someone you trust about how you feel這句話用了定語從句。文章還使用了合適的連接詞First, Second, And third使文章很連貫。
